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Post by stableclaw on Aug 28, 2006 19:31:22 GMT -5
Thanks, I like you, you never gave me much trouble, thanks a lot for understanding.
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Post by Lightningstar on Aug 28, 2006 19:59:04 GMT -5
You're very welcome, Stableclaw! And thank YOU, too!
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Post by fox on Aug 28, 2006 20:08:30 GMT -5
:DClaw, you can be whatever you wish!
Eeeeeeek! The frying pan! **Shrieks in terror.**
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Post by blackstorm on Sept 1, 2006 11:16:45 GMT -5
Name: Duskpaw Gender: Tom Personality: Very kind and caring, but can lose his temper such as with being taunted. Loves playing and hunting. Would fight someone, but being young, he isn't very good at it. History: He was born in ThunderClan, and being only an Apprentice he has little history. He was cared for by his mother, and his father, as he grew to be an Apprentice. The only thing more I can say is he was one of the youngest of his few brothers and sisters. Sample RP: *The dark brown cat casts a long shadow behind him as he walks in the sun. The shadow slowly stretches at the sun begins to sink. The Apprentice's pads touch the ground lightly as he wanders his Clan's border. He sighs gently. The cat glances at a tree now covering him in shade. His form lowers to lay at its base. His eyes stare into the endless black hole of the sky. The stars begin to cover the sky.* I'll miss you, Stormheart... *mews the young tom. Just then, a star shoots through the sky.* I only found a few things misspelled and nothing in the personality. I looked and tried to correct anything. *EDIT* To fix RP example as LS(Lightningstar) said. Lightningstar has a new nickname.
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Post by Lightningstar on Sept 1, 2006 12:26:56 GMT -5
That looks great, Blackstorm! Thank you! I'll let Foxstar place you in a group, but I think you're a great roleplayer. Oh! Just one thing that I noticed: we have sort of changed the rules and so now on this site we're trying our best to RP with asterisks (*)...the way you do that, is by putting them around your actions. For example, you said
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Instead, you can say *The stars begin to cover the sky.* I'll miss you, Stormheart... *mews the young tom.*
Great job, though! ;D
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Post by blackstorm on Sept 2, 2006 14:33:08 GMT -5
Oh goodie... *Sigh* I'll change it. I am weird...
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Lightningstar logged out
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Post by Lightningstar logged out on Sept 2, 2006 14:39:16 GMT -5
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Post by blackstorm on Sept 2, 2006 14:40:54 GMT -5
Lovin' the smilies. Luff. You have a new nickname*See my last joining post*.
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Post by Lightningstar on Sept 2, 2006 14:42:58 GMT -5
Wow! Great! Ooh...I'm LS! I like it! Oh, and thanks for checking your spelling and everything. That's really great, Blackstorm!
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Post by blackstorm on Sept 2, 2006 14:45:11 GMT -5
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Post by Lightningstar on Sept 2, 2006 20:36:01 GMT -5
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Post by blackstorm on Sept 3, 2006 8:03:22 GMT -5
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Post by fox on Sept 3, 2006 13:45:55 GMT -5
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Blackstorm Guest Mode
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Post by Blackstorm Guest Mode on Sept 3, 2006 14:41:59 GMT -5
... Crazy ol' Foxstar. Shall I use my frying pan? Muahahahaha... Okay...which group am I in?
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Post by silverpaw on Sept 9, 2006 18:25:12 GMT -5
Name:silverpaw Gender:female Personality:She likes climbing but some times cant get back down, enjoys having fun, is sometimes ambitius History: Her mother left her when she was small and she was raised by wolves. Sample RP: "Mother where are you." She wailed looking around. "I am not your mother you are a cat." came a voice from the darkness. "But I am a wolf." She wailed and waited for a replie. She began to cry bewildered and lost. "Mother come back." A silver and white wolf walked out of the trees and up to her. "Listen I am not your mother I only took pitty on you because I killed your mother and father." She turned and walked away living siverpaw sitting there bewilded.
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