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Post by fox on Aug 28, 2006 11:12:15 GMT -5
Of course, Leafpool!
I'm not the kind of person to hold a grudge. Thanks for understanding!
(I'll grade the RP's later... chores....)
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Post by |Morgen[Herz]|) on Aug 28, 2006 11:13:22 GMT -5
*grumbles* fine just kidding!!!
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Post by woodpecker on Aug 28, 2006 11:13:57 GMT -5
I HATE CHORES!!! hehehe!!!
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Post by fox on Aug 28, 2006 11:39:29 GMT -5
Yeah... This time I had to take care of my neighbors cats, who are really skittish. Notail-A whole lot better, I see a HUGE improvement! You could still spice up the personality a bit, but other wise I like it. The transitions between sentences are kinda choppy, but otherwise it looks good. You are in RP class 2. Mothswirl-Whoa, you're really good for your first shot! I almost put you in class 1, but you could still work on a couple things, like the puncuation and capitalization, but that's fantastic! RP class 2, but soon to move up!
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Post by woodpecker on Aug 28, 2006 11:43:14 GMT -5
Can i start now?
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Post by fox on Aug 28, 2006 11:45:58 GMT -5
Yeah! Hey, guys, once you are placed in a group, you can start the activities, such as fights and contests and all that jazz!
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Post by |Morgen[Herz]|) on Aug 28, 2006 11:46:58 GMT -5
What class am I in?
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Post by fox on Aug 28, 2006 11:51:44 GMT -5
Hmmm... You're in 3- for now... IMPORTANT: If I ever see an improvement in your RPing, I will move you up a level, even if you RP outside of the RP center!Oh, and RPing in the present tense is necessary, but not a strict rule. If something sounds really awkward, you can change it.
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Post by |Morgen[Herz]|) on Aug 28, 2006 11:53:28 GMT -5
Just curious.... why am I in three?
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Post by woodpecker on Aug 28, 2006 11:54:21 GMT -5
Am i in 2?
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Post by |Morgen[Herz]|) on Aug 28, 2006 12:00:32 GMT -5
Name:Darkfur Gender:she-cat Personality: calm but grumpy History: Born and raised in Riverclan. Watched her best friend get slaughtered by rogues. Sample RP: *Darkpaw sits down in front of the high rock. Her leader was making a warrior ceremony!*Darkpaw, please step forward,* Darkpaw steps forwards * Do you promise to uphold the warrior code, even at the cost of your life?* she nods* I do,* The leader looks at her * Then from this moment on your new name shall be darkfur!*
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Post by fox on Aug 28, 2006 12:00:38 GMT -5
Morningheart- I like that bio 20 billion times better than your first one. This is good, you are in class 2 now.
You could make your history and personality a bit more detailed, and get to the really interesting part.
Your sample RP is nice, I like the vocabulary, I can almost feel Darkfur's joy. The last sentences is kinda fuzzy, but you did well.
You can move on to other places now.
Leafpool- Look at the members and leaders board if you have questions about that.
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Post by |Morgen[Herz]|) on Aug 28, 2006 12:33:10 GMT -5
-huggles- OH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!
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Post by Lightningstar on Aug 28, 2006 12:36:56 GMT -5
Thank YOU, Morningheart! We're sorry if we started arguing too. We shouldn't have been acting like we know everything and all that, but I'm glad everybody's forgiven! YAY! And great job everybody!
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Post by fox on Aug 28, 2006 12:44:10 GMT -5
I hope nobody quits the RP center...
There's no reason why, either, if you think about it, you don't even have to be active on it...
I'm such an idiot/imbocile/dolt/thickhead/know-it-all...
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